diff --git a/fs-succinct/succinct.tex b/fs-succinct/succinct.tex
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--- a/fs-succinct/succinct.tex
+++ b/fs-succinct/succinct.tex
@@ -11,31 +11,33 @@ sctructures have linear space complexity, which is asymptotically optimal.
 However, in this chapter, we shall use a much more fine-grained notion of space
 efficiency and measure space requirements in bits.
 
-Imagine we have a universe $X$ and we want a data structure to hold a single
-element $x \in X$. For example, $X$ can be the universe of all length-$n$ sequences
-of integers from the range $[m]$ and we want a data structure to hold such
-a sequence (we shall limit ourselves to finite universes only).
+Imagine we have a data structure whose size is parametrized by some parameter
+$n$ (e.g. number of elements). Let us define $X(n)$ as the universe of all possible
+values that a size-$n$ data structure (as a whole) can hold. For example if we
+have a data structure for storing strings from a fixed alphabet, $X(n)$ may be the
+universe of all length-$n$ strings from this alphabet.
 
-The information-theoretically optimal size of such a data structure is
-$OPT := \lceil\log |X|\rceil$ bits (which is essentilly the entropy of
-a uniform probability distribution over $X$).
+Let us denote $s(n)$ the number of bits needed to store a size-$n$ data structure.
+The information-theoretical optimum is $OPT(n) := \lceil\log |X(n)|\rceil$
+(which is essentially the entropy of a uniform distribution over $X(n)$).
 
 Now we can define three classes of data structures based on their fine-grained space
 efficiency:
 
-\defn{An {\I implicit data structure} is one that uses at most $OPT + \O(1)$ bits of space.}
+\defn{An {\I implicit data structure} is one that uses at most $OPT(n) + \O(1)$ bits of space.}
 
 A typical implicit data structure contains just its elements in some order and nothing more.
 Examples include sorted arrays and heaps.
 
-\defn{A {\I succinct data structure} is one that uses at most $OPT + {\rm o}(OPT)$ bits of space.}
-\defn{A {\I compact data structure} is one that uses at most $\O(OPT)$ bits of space.}
+\defn{A {\I succinct data structure} is one that uses at most $OPT(n) + {\rm o}(OPT(n))$ bits of space.}
+\defn{A {\I compact data structure} is one that uses at most $\O(OPT(n))$ bits of space.}
 
-Note that some linear-space data structures are not even compact --  because we are counting
-bits now, not words. For example, a binary search tree representing a length-$n$ sequence
-of numbers from range $[m]$ needs $\O(n (\log n + \log m))$ bits, whereas $OPT$ is
-$n \log m$. For $n >> m$, this does not satisfy the requirements for a compact data
-structure.
+Note that some linear-space data structures are not even compact --  because we
+are counting bits now, not words. For example, a linked list representing a
+length-$n$ sequence of numbers from range $[m]$ needs $\O(n (\log n + \log m))$
+bits ($\log n$ bits are used to represent a next-pointer), whereas $OPT$ is $n
+\log m$. For $n \gg m$, this does not satisfy the requirements for a compact
+data structure.
 
 And of course, as with any data structure, we want to be able to perform reasonably
 fast operations on these space-efficient data structures.